30 April, 2007

Araby on the water, with new red bottom paint and white ratlines

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txdave said...

Hi Jonah great blog in some important ways, you write well, story compelling, and boat is beautiful.

Internet readers tend to like shorter posts, smaller bites, and definitions of unfamiliar terms immediately.

If you're not writing, hoping for a large audience, really all is excellent. You're entertaining your friends, I'm sure.

Some more color, maybe a larger more consistent font would be good and more photos. I'd even show the boat at least every other post, it's really something to see and helps relate.

Since you like travel and solitude, may I suggest:

dreamy-destinations.blogspot.com

waterfallsuplift.blogspot.com

good luck

dave

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